Strings

Strings

A Poem by Bree135

I am  the puppet , completely hollow inside. It's as if i am dead.
Your the puppeteer, pulling my strings. Forcing me to be what you want.
Everyday it's like I am forced to put on a show for you.
Constantly being degraded nothing is ever good enough for you.
 I am just sitting on my shelf waiting for my strings to be cut.

© 2014 Bree135


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You have managed to pose a very powerful message through a very short poem and that speaks to your talent. The hopelessness is the feeling that came through to me the most but you have conveyed it in a beautiful way.

Posted 9 Years Ago


expression of real life situation that sometime make us feel so bind inside. i like the way you describe these things in words

Posted 9 Years Ago



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