Numb

I have no desires,

No wants or needs,

Your words now only

Echo my mem'ries,

Though my heart is still beating,

I no longer conceal,

My emotions are gone,

I no longer feel.

Dead inside,

I lay on this floor,

Tortured forever,

And numbed to the core.

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[poetdweller]

I love this peice, the flow off the tongue is precious and smooth and the emotoins are easy to connect with.

[Seracies]

Desolate and depressing, but well written. The flow was well paced and you portrayed the dark feelings truly well. The emotions were easy to connect with.