Misunderstood..

Misunderstood..

A Poem by Farhan Shaikh

His world has been
destroyed,
people around were
annoyed.

His terror made him
cruel,
His igniting heart got
fuel.

As a betrayer he
stood,
nothing he was, but only
misunderstood.

His world was ending with
hatred,
still for the right moment
he waited.

His hope was as strong
as stone,
At last he ended up
Alone.

© 2017 Farhan Shaikh



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Rollercoaster feelings of abandonment, hope, bravery and sadness all rushed through my mind as I read this. A VERY touching poem indeed. I only wish I could do poetry but I never will be able too. To put all these feelings into such a short piece takes some skill.

Great job.

Mark.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Farhan Shaikh

3 Months Ago

Thank you so much mark☺
Good to see you back☺
matrixmark

3 Months Ago

Not a problem. Always a pleasure to read quality work. And its so nice that people have been so unde.. read more
Farhan Shaikh

3 Months Ago

That's good to know☺
This poem feels somehow sad but I like it.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Farhan Shaikh

4 Months Ago

Thanks so much 😊
Wow! This is very well written, so solemn, with superb musicality (third stanza gets wonky in the third line, but not too much), and you start with a bang and end with another bang. Well done!

Posted 4 Months Ago


Farhan Shaikh

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much 😊
wow.. deep. You are improving amazingly, Strong emotion. Poetically beautiful and really connects... So good, Keep it up . Great work

Posted 4 Months Ago


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yes I too sometime feel that we get misunderstood only under two situations: either we give something so much value that seems to be extravagant (unfortunately) to that one or select a wrong mile stone to measure the remaining distance that need to be covered..very emotional and practical write

Posted 4 Months Ago


Farhan Shaikh

4 Months Ago

Right Mou..thanks for stopping by
No! Awww that's such a sad ending. My heart just broke. I was kinda hoping for a turn around since this reminds me of myself a little bit. Never the less... great job.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Farhan Shaikh

4 Months Ago

Thankyou jessica☺
Very intriguing from the start. Loved this

Posted 4 Months Ago


Farhan Shaikh

4 Months Ago

Thanks so much 😊
wow i love this. so many images went through my head and i connected with the words, well done!!

Posted 4 Months Ago


Farhan Shaikh

4 Months Ago

Thank you xoxo
Wow (: very nice, very deep poem

Posted 4 Months Ago


Farhan Shaikh

4 Months Ago

Thank you Daniela..☺
Misunderstood it seems is apt title for this poem. It's characterized by strength though it seems to end on a depressing note.. Like left alone. Alone is where you find hope and courage. Alone and misunderstood isn't that bad.. Just a way to build a better world :)

Nice work👍😊

Posted 4 Months Ago


Farhan Shaikh

4 Months Ago

Exactly Krutika...
Thanks so much btw.

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Farhan Shaikh
Farhan Shaikh

Mumbai, India



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