Kill love

Something that nearly broke my own heart.

 One last time, One last look, into those eyes,that once you were afraid of

Try to smile,hands held tightly,as they begin to part ways of life

No more smiles as she wakes up, No more giggles for him to laugh at

The old life ends now and here,as the tips of their finger's touch dissappear

Slowly turn around and look down, holding the case tightly,trying to stop the tears

No words come out as that simple sentence aches in her throat

No, she won't say it anymore, to anybody,anything,anyone, not anymore

Promise to be just friends after all of that won't work, moving out this life,to another world

He tries to say good bye, trying to smile and say "see ya later"

But all that comes out are those silent words "I love you too"

She runs down the stairs and out of the door, crying and confused

Knowing that there has to be no turning back, until a car hits and the bumper knocked her out

Days went by, news of coma as he shakes his head, no point in living now

Two lives ruined by love, their love over dose, their addiction, paying back

Fate is to be deciding their lives and deaths, as each's hearts cry their tears away

Author's Note

something I thought about, enjoy, break your heart

Reviews

[Helen Woodward]

There is a story within a story here and I must say it took my heart to the brink of the jumping off place...almost.
Love cannot be killed, that is impossible, for even after death love continues to grow. And though it seems impossible to grasp, when love is toxic at times it still has a longing for touch.
I liked your piece very much, it definitely touches the emotional core of your reader...
Thank you...I hope its fiction?
Cheers,

Helen :-)

[Pancole's Jelly Bean]

That is definitely what happens in life.

Fate or faith? Who should be the chooser today? Such a game sometimes, or should I say such a joke. It is depressing but there is hope, ALWAYS.

Fantastic writing. Keep going. =)

[hershey's kiss]

Wow.
Yea, that most certainly did break my heart.
What a wonderfully written poem.

- hershey's kiss