My Heart

My heart is beating in your chest.

 

So why don't you rip it out.

 

And save us both the pain.

Author's Note

This is my first attempt at a really short, 3 line poem. How did I do?

Reviews

[Sincerely, Alex]

Holy cracker jackers.

Dude, your three line poem is way better than mine. It has so much emotion in such few words.
Amazing, my dear.


Alex

[Sean M. Addams]

wow ... very powerful says so much in this short piece.. i liked this alot nice work!!!

[Just Charles]

for this to effectively work, it must have a fluid amount of emotions, pack a punch to it. It is extremely difficult to compact such emotion into only three lines. Keep working at it.