Embracing Happiness

Getting used to love after a life of pain.

The material scent is weakening her will.

His smile intoxicates her eyes,

As his words intrigue her lips.

A touch of heaven upon her skin erases all thought and worry.

Hope is burried deep within his icy blues.

Falling into his kiss,

She is forgetting the passion of rage.

Bodies intwined like red and black roses,

They are pain-filled purity.

A fire ignites in their hearts,

And they silently take the vows of forever.

 

Author's Note

If your reading this, (you know who you are) then yes dear, I wrote this about you.

Reviews

[Liz-z]

"His smile intoxicates her eyes,
As his words intrigue her lips"
Fantastic, loved those lines, loved it loved it loved it!

"She is forgetting the passion of rage
Bodies entwined like red and black roses"

"And they silently take the vows of forever"

Love it, this is beautiful. Please do keep writing! :D

[kyleisanidiot]

i have to start by saying how sorry i am so im very very sorry Imu shōjiki zan'nen... also this poem is A M A Z I N G as is everything u write ... so beautiful ... even if it does make me bawl like a little girl ... there all so filled with genuine emotion and true feeling .... also im not worthy of u writing about me i dont deserve it ... please write about someone who is worth something Watashi wa subete watashi no kokoro ni eien ni anata o aish

[PaperHearts]

Wow! This was such a stunning write. I thought that your wording in this piece was completely captivating, in particular the lines "Hope is burried deep within his icy blues./Falling into his kiss,/She is forgetting the passion of rage.". I loved the fact that you were able to balance the dark and grim side of lust with the total beauty of romance. The only mistake that I noticed was that 'intwined' should be 'entwined', but other than that, this was an amazing poem. :)
~PaperHearts

[thatbryngirl]

again, i looved this.

[Sincerely, Alex]

I like this feeling of a new, re-found hope.
You can tell me a story and have beautiful, clear images with just a few words.
Wonderful.