Embracing Happiness

Embracing Happiness

A Poem by Alisa_the_fluff_ball
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Getting used to love after a life of pain.

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The material scent is weakening her will.

His smile intoxicates her eyes,

As his words intrigue her lips.

A touch of heaven upon her skin erases all thought and worry.

Hope is burried deep within his icy blues.

Falling into his kiss,

She is forgetting the passion of rage.

Bodies intwined like red and black roses,

They are pain-filled purity.

A fire ignites in their hearts,

And they silently take the vows of forever.

 


© 2010 Alisa_the_fluff_ball



Author's Note

Alisa_the_fluff_ball
If your reading this, (you know who you are) then yes dear, I wrote this about you.

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"His smile intoxicates her eyes,
As his words intrigue her lips"
Fantastic, loved those lines, loved it loved it loved it!

"She is forgetting the passion of rage
Bodies entwined like red and black roses"

"And they silently take the vows of forever"

Love it, this is beautiful. Please do keep writing! :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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i have to start by saying how sorry i am so im very very sorry Imu shōjiki zan'nen... also this poem is A M A Z I N G as is everything u write ... so beautiful ... even if it does make me bawl like a little girl ... there all so filled with genuine emotion and true feeling .... also im not worthy of u writing about me i dont deserve it ... please write about someone who is worth something Watashi wa subete watashi no kokoro ni eien ni anata o aish

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wow! This was such a stunning write. I thought that your wording in this piece was completely captivating, in particular the lines "Hope is burried deep within his icy blues./Falling into his kiss,/She is forgetting the passion of rage.". I loved the fact that you were able to balance the dark and grim side of lust with the total beauty of romance. The only mistake that I noticed was that 'intwined' should be 'entwined', but other than that, this was an amazing poem. :)
~PaperHearts

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

again, i looved this.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this feeling of a new, re-found hope.
You can tell me a story and have beautiful, clear images with just a few words.
Wonderful.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"His smile intoxicates her eyes,
As his words intrigue her lips"
Fantastic, loved those lines, loved it loved it loved it!

"She is forgetting the passion of rage
Bodies entwined like red and black roses"

"And they silently take the vows of forever"

Love it, this is beautiful. Please do keep writing! :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 3, 2010
Last Updated on August 3, 2010
Tags: love, happiness, pain, used to, poetry

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Alisa_the_fluff_ball
Alisa_the_fluff_ball

Ow. My life. It hurts.



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Hello all! My name is Alisa. I live to sing and to write. I am bisexual, if you have a problem with that, then please save us all the trouble and navigate away from this page. My style changes daily, .. more..

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