Fill. Flutter. Fly.

Fill. Flutter. Fly.

A Poem by FocusedAmnesia
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"MUSIC. The only air I breath." Dan Arnold.

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Music fills my mind; fluttering melodies, flying words.
And you, for a sweet moment, disappear.

© 2012 FocusedAmnesia



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this flows just like music itself :) (great choice for the picture btw)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Music can do many things...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

absolutely

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it's so short and such an intriguing poem! i can't stop reading it!! haha. LOVE IT!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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You've done quite a lot here... the second line tells the story. Very nice!
Kerplunk... right into the favorites folder.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

how delightfully curious~ indeed inside of the body of music there is more comfort to be had sometimes than within human arms~
a smooth poetic flow~

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful write about one of my favoritie things.......
Peace
Robin

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Incredible
music is our escape

i love this moment that you captured. i can relate so well to it.

you should check out my poem flawless potential.
i bet you would appreciate it! it was inspired by a talented musician


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Loved this... simple, concise, and says so much all the same. Ambiguous with enough to relate to as to give a moment or two for thought. Perfect proportions. :)

Great piece!

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 9, 2010
Last Updated on December 8, 2012
Tags: Music, Words, Melody, Moment, Disappear, Flutter

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