Down in History

for Tovli's 10/40 challenge write

Ask me some history trivia

   past-tense or present

and as a drunk stumbles

  like there's oil under his shoes

after he's fine-dined on bread

  and too much wine..

part  of my bookworm knowledge

falls down lower than my iron deficiency.

 

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

interesting use of the words...we might think we are more than we are...but then when push comes to shove, we find humility, maybe at the bottom of that wine glass...it makes us a little fuzzy in our thinking.

having done trivia for so many years with our Logan team...i can really appreciate this poem...

[Fran Marie]

Thanks, Jacob; so much for reading , glad you enjoyed;

[Abhilash Hegde]

The style of writing is what strikes me here.
Careful use of words with fine play, makes it really stimulating to read.
These lines were indeed brought a smile :)
"and as a drunk stumbles
like there's oil under his shoes"
Thanks for sharing!

[Ilerah]

Nice, well written and well put together. I enjoyed reading it.

[alf]

Hi Fran. Great use of the prompt words, I think, and within the word count. great going!! alf

[Fran Marie]

many thanks Alf,,glad you enjoyed..

[~]

Ohhh.. what a delightful piece. Your genius to connect words and themes is beyond compare. I liked the fun and playfulness on words here Fran!! A clever gem!!

[Fran Marie]

thanks, Moonskittles, so much for reading and reviewing my poem;

[~]

:) i will be back soon :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Drink enough and you will drink yourself stupid....this is true! You did a great job using the words. Kudos! Lydi**

[Fran Marie]

Yes, lol, I would imagine so..many thanks Lydi;

[Matching Socks]

Great use of words for this challenge FranMarie!

[Fran Marie]

Many thanks, Ana..

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

That was delightful! Hehehe...that should show us to be less cocky and more modest in our knowledge of whatever.

[Fran Marie]

lol, yep, for sure..many thanks Nadia..

[wordman]

I can relate to that but a country boy can survive

[Fran Marie]

Thanks, Ron, so very much,

[wordman]

you are welcome

[Helena]

A very humorous take on Tovli's Ten challenge. Well done! Thank you for submitting this!

[Fran Marie]

Many thanks, Helena.. so much appriciated;