Cardinal

 

 

 

 

Do you see?
the little red bird
amid snow
and cold air
Yes, he flies each day
winter's sky

He's sunshine
to my eyes.

 

Do you hear?
'Tis melodic sound
notes carried
thru~the wind
Perched upon pine's green
A patterened
symphony
to my ears.

 

Do you feel?
Cheerful, glee he brings
Just veiwing
listening
his flying,singing
gladens.'Tis
fulfillment
to my soul.

 

 

Ah yes,

the bird flies

because he has

his wings

and yes,

the bird  sings

because it has

a song

 

Reviews

[Wicahpi]

This is very nice. Reminds me of the baby cardinal at my dads house a few summers ago, that discovered his imagine in one of the windows. He's fly from the bushes, to the window sill; fluff up his feathers, puff his chest out, chirp loudly at the imagine, then fly back to the bushes. He did this over and over again, all day! lol. It was just too cute, too funny.

[Desert Dreamer]

The cardinal brings sunshine to all, such a beautiful bird. I feel the joy in your poem.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on this great winning poem. Well Done!

[Star Wolf]

This is a very cheerful poem about the cardinal.

[angelinmypocket]

A wonderful write Fran...about one of God's greatest gifts. So many take for granted the many gifts God has bestowed us with...They don't feel the breeze blowing through thier hair...they don't hear the music of the wind blowing through the trees...they don't hear the music of birdsong...and they can't see the forest for the trees.
Love/Liz/angelinmypocket

[Ken Simm.]

Simply wonderful Fran. Lovely and without flaw.

[Emily B]

Aw, another terrific poem of nature. I love the cardinal. It's my favorite bird. I love to watch them out my window.

[Cold Coffee Magazine]

Great write

[Fran Marie]

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[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

This is a wonderful poem. I have a little cardinal that I believe has made friends with my cats or just like to tease them jumping around in a tree near the window. Always comes around.


Great write!