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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
Pest

Pest

A Poem by Fran Marie

Ewww a nasty fly

 

  I'm  so glad you're dead at last

 

                            pesky, dirty pest

© 2008 Fran Marie


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I like this. That's how I feel when I've finally got the fly!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Well... short and to the point. I don't really like flies either but this poem was lacking a little more... detail and content for me.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice poem flies are terrible. But greatly true about flies~Elijah

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm just glad there weren't any old ladies around to swallow the fly... I hear that doesn't often turn out too well. Cute poem.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

My thoughts also...

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Glad you got him, I hate flies and those nasty little sour nats that seem to come in when one buys fruit. Especially banana's. They are almost impossible to get rid of.

Love the pic.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 13, 2008
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  Fran Marie
Fran Marie

Paris, KY



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