In Love

 

beneath waterfalls loving you is so easy feeling each moment   breathing life into me with your kisses divine ecstasy is mine   becoming one heart beat we share true bliss,even stars know we're in love

Reviews

[Spat Queen]

I love the last line of this.
/even stars know we're in love./

What a great line. It lends a little to sap, at the same time it somehow opens the piece wide up and offers an image toward infinite possibilities so characteristic of being in love. Not that I can completely relate, I am not in love, myself or anything drunkenly, but this piece inspires a stir that every reader can appreciate. Lovely write, Fran Marie.

[DanaRegen]

Fran,
Thanks for entering this in my contest, and good luck! Beautiful haiku, I loved the last stanza, it felt so true. Once again good luck, and gorgeous poem!
-Dana :)

[Dianna Reneé]

It's amazing how you can say so much with such few words. You managed to explain a feeling in just three stanzas that for some people, takes three times that.

[Ladysue]

Oh this was was just so dreamy. Yes, the last line is gorgeous!!! It flowed divinely and it was a delight to read!!!

[Chillbear Latrigue]

Wondrous imagery in this one, my dear. Very impact filled and succinct.

[Poeticpiers]

delightful in its simplicity