Vampire Vincent From Death's Crypt

"Master of Suspense" Alfred Hitchcock brings back "Master of The Horror Genre" Famous Filmstar and Actor Vincent Price~ for Sean's Contest

 

In a pit dark and black he lies
he suddenly begins to rise
an evil gleam within his eyes
a new disquise, who was this guy?
 
A bony hand pushed from the mud
covered in gore and dark red blood
How blessed he thought,freed from death
to breathe new life, to take a breath
 
A new image he now possessed
as he stood above his tomestone rest
but who had granted this liberty
this gift of immortality?
 
In a distinctive tone of voice he said
I refuse to die, I will not be dead
then he heard a distant cry
as "The Birds" fell from the sky
 
"Good Evening" a man cloaked in black
I am the one who brought you back
you owe me, Price, you now must pay.
A vampire part in my new play
 
The Master of Suspense pulled out a script
called "Vampire Vincent From Death's Crypt
Vinny roared with laughter at such a role
" This part is perfect, for it has no soul"
 
"True, so true but you still have a heart
and I'm in charge of props that play a part"
this isn't "The Haunted House on the Hill"
your not just playing a vampire~This is real!
 
or is it?
 
 

Reviews

[Sean M. Addams]

i'm really really impressed by this piece ... the darkness and story of this piece were just brillant .... overall very nice job on this one ... this is definitley going in my favs.... lines in this I liked alot....The Master of Suspense pulled out a script
called "Vampire Vincent From Death's Crypt
Vinny roared with laughter at such a role
" This part is perfect, for it has no soul"

"True, so true but you still have a heart
and I'm in charge of props that play a part"..................... very genius!!!!
this isn't "The Haunted House on the Hill"
your not just playing a vampire~This is real!

[Obsidian Blackbird McNi..]

or is it really? Ta-dah, this bit is sassy and vampy. that's a powerful combo. i'm off my tits on happiness after reading this. really, it makes me want to dawn a cape and top hat and find a monocle.

[deeps]

Awesome write Fran!
I like this alot.
I like those vampire writes
They are my faves.
This is amazing

[Sheila Kline]

Oh, a good adaptation of the write....and I love the question at the end....leaves us thinking!!
Spooky!

I love the line, "Vampire Vincent From Death's Crypt. Vinny roared........very clever!

Good luck in Sean's contest!

Scared Sheila!