Dreamland Fantasy

 

I saunter through a dreamland fantasy
 in steamy waters of ecstacy
      my heartbeat quickens
        my pulse races
          In an amber moon your face I see
 
          
 
A sudden rush of pleasure enchants me
   as a soft night breeze gently flows
      palm trees sway
        a free spirit plays
            In a midnight dream you call to me
 
 
 
Shades of white mixes into desire
   as a red-hot flame inside me glows
    for I am woman
       I need no reason
              for my lust and love to show
 
 
 
I inhale the scent of your flesh
     as I undress you from head to toe
         for you are man
           you need not understand
               for this fantasy to grow
 
 
 
I sense the beauty in all its charm
  I'm entranced by a wondrous dream
    come wrap yourself around me
       I'll savor your every touch
               loverman of my dreamland fantasy
     
     

       

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

Lol...I have been reading you for so long, Fran, that I knew it was your voice even before I saw the author's name. How cool is that? The night, the moon all contribute to the theme of fantasy. It is beautifully laid out with just enough romance, lust and intrigue. Kudos!

[Fran Marie]

thanks so much, Brie, lol, that is too cool indeed;

[Sheila Kline]

From my first glance of the image to the last word, I felt myself swept away into the sensuality of your enchanting write! It is flowing, and full of passion that allowed my psyche to be wisked away into the waters of desire!!
Very well written....descriptive and "HOT"!.....

DEFINITELY AN OOOOOH LA LA WRITE!!!
going in m fav's!!

[An owl on the moon]

This is such a beautifully woven, sensual write that flows tenderly line by line... You create a world for two that is a delight in every way, filling the senses with the rapture of love!

[TamiViolet]

The flow is amazing in this piece, Fran.... It's classy, seductive, sensual and provocative. Undoubtedly one of your best as I feel myself swaying with the palm trees. Absolutely gorgeous work, my friend, from the very first stanza to the last....

'loverman'.....oh, yeah!!! :-)

Into my favorites. Thank you, dear one.

[Sean M. Addams]

liked this alot a very beautiful sizzling piece liked the romantic feel to this also... overall a very well done piece ..nice job on this!!

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

Absolutely amazing... Very enchanting :)

[Tina Kline]

What a beautiful fantasy. Erotic and romantic at the same time. You weave a very enchanting spell with your words. Love this!

[Patricia]

OOOOh girl! What a reminder of our inner beauty, strenght, and control. I love it! Keep going!!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I think the best way to describe this piece is eloquently sensual.
A very seductive feel to the piece that stimulates the senses but leaves plenty to the imagination.

[Magdelena]

Not only was this enchanting, but it was the most exciting piece I have seen in a long time! I felt this touch me, the words softly moving through my thoughts and slowly sailing away..

Oh what dreams it holds... Well done!!

Mags xx