Dragon

Dragon

A Poem by Gaia Octavia

Do not mistake
my softness for clay
for I am the beast
and you are the prey

© 2017 Gaia Octavia



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This reminds me of the angler fish. It appears to show weakness, falsely, with a fake lure. Only to end up the hunter, eating the prey. I enjoyed your poem. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Gaia Octavia

2 Months Ago

Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed it. An angler fish is a GREAT IDEA for inspiring a piece w an enorm.. read more
Well, at least she is warning him. Some just pounce out of the blue! Very clever four lines, and with rhymes.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Gaia Octavia

2 Months Ago

Why, thank you very much. I do love rhymes and such 🤓🤓
I love that you included 'warning' in your tags for the poem. I read something like this about static IP addresses and it left me unimpressed but this is sharper.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Gaia Octavia

2 Months Ago

Sharper indeed 😉 Thank you for your review.
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A teen boy gets killed, but trades his soul for another chance. He changes. A girl notices the new boy with silver eyes.
Four lines of killer verse. Loved the rhyme, but the structure stole the show for me. Such fun to read aloud. Poetry with claws.

Posted 2 Months Ago


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Gaia Octavia

2 Months Ago

Thank you, as usual, for your kind review.
Let not the mask deceive the mind,
Beware the beast that lurks behind!

Well done!

Posted 2 Months Ago


Gaia Octavia

2 Months Ago

Thank you very much 😀 Where is that from?
emipoemi

2 Months Ago

it's an original.....wanted to say something in response to the poem, and that's what came out.
Gaia Octavia

2 Months Ago

I love it 😎👍

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