Dragon

Dragon

A Poem by Gaia Octavia

Do not mistake
my softness for clay
for I am the beast
and you are the prey

© 2017 Gaia Octavia



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This reminds me of the angler fish. It appears to show weakness, falsely, with a fake lure. Only to end up the hunter, eating the prey. I enjoyed your poem. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Gaia Octavia

4 Months Ago

Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed it. An angler fish is a GREAT IDEA for inspiring a piece w an enorm.. read more
Well, at least she is warning him. Some just pounce out of the blue! Very clever four lines, and with rhymes.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Gaia Octavia

4 Months Ago

Why, thank you very much. I do love rhymes and such 🤓🤓
I love that you included 'warning' in your tags for the poem. I read something like this about static IP addresses and it left me unimpressed but this is sharper.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Gaia Octavia

4 Months Ago

Sharper indeed 😉 Thank you for your review.
Four lines of killer verse. Loved the rhyme, but the structure stole the show for me. Such fun to read aloud. Poetry with claws.

Posted 4 Months Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gaia Octavia

4 Months Ago

Thank you, as usual, for your kind review.
Let not the mask deceive the mind,
Beware the beast that lurks behind!

Well done!

Posted 4 Months Ago


Gaia Octavia

4 Months Ago

Thank you very much 😀 Where is that from?
emipoemi

4 Months Ago

it's an original.....wanted to say something in response to the poem, and that's what came out.
Gaia Octavia

4 Months Ago

I love it 😎👍

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Added on July 23, 2017
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