Was I dreaming

Was I dreaming

A Poem by Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet
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http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FireFox9/1359646/ this was inspired by the poem My love is Lost by: Matthew and amazing write check out his Write a wonderful piece that I love

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Was I dreaming when

I woke to you not there.


The mold of your

body in the sheets

is all I see.


What happened?

was it something I

said please come

back to me Love.


The scent of your

perfume still lingers,


I still smell your

sweet scent it's

never left.


The sound of  your

lovely laughter

echoes all through

the hallways.



The bed is cold

now through the

nights without you.


There is a burning pain

this ache in my heart

for you.


Was I dreaming you

were gone when

I woke this Morning.

© 2014 Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet


Author's Note

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/FireFox9/1359646/

this was inspired by the poem My love is Lost by: Matthew
and amazing write check out his Write a wonderful piece that I love

Not my photo but thought it fit this piece it looks like a invisible dream.


The ones that love us the most Hurt us the most Remember that :)
that's something I have come to learn down the years of life.

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Awesome! I really truly like the way you write. It's different and seems to follow no distinct pattern, yet it flows so well. Great job and I'm glad that I was able to help inspire it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

Why! Thank you for your kind words :) I am glad that you liked it. blessings. kindred poet

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Added on May 19, 2014
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Tags: Love, Heartache, Romance, Fction for me, Still sad Romance, Poem, poetry

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