Thrilling Killer

Thrilling Killer

A Story by Gillzy
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Contest: Describe a story in just 10 words.

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She was thrilled in the bedroom, killed in the kitchen.

© 2008 Gillzy


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You are so right, just who can you trust? This will amuse you. I used to be a chef.

She was thrilled in the kitchen, killed in the bedroom..............thats my alternate version!

So pleased you have a top story. Well done!!!!!

Hope you win the contest.

Posted 16 Years Ago


11 of 11 people found this review constructive.




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Very nice piece. I love all the possibilities - its kind of like radio before tv. You fill in the blanks for yourself instead of being spoonfed everything. Nice.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow,Gillian! I hope it won. It's fantastic... very powerful.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a lot said in so few a wrods, but it adds so much thought, so many f=different scerios, and so many questions, could be a beginning of a story that would hook people in from this one sentence. XX

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it because it's short!!! I am basic , i do not like reading essays. I am really glad you are highlighting how dangerous kitchens are.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

with the candlestick, by Professor Plum... LOL

or, what happens when the Kissing Bandit has to escalate his modus operandi to be satisfied...
LOL, LOL

I could go on, but you've written an outline that could be developed SO many ways . Everyone that comes to this is instantly engaged and goes their merry way fleshing out their own details. Good job!



Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

thank you for posting this. I read gary's work and suspected this was the original, but wasn't sure! Very good ten word story, perhaps you can't trust anyone! : )

Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 5 people found this review constructive.

This is great.. alot said in 10 words!

Chloe
xoxo

Posted 16 Years Ago


5 of 6 people found this review constructive.

Answer: No, you can�t! (oh, well maybe you can, but ony THE ONE! ...LOL)

Love it! Both witty and dark!

Posted 16 Years Ago


7 of 7 people found this review constructive.

What!!!!
She was killed shocker!!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


8 of 9 people found this review constructive.

very tentalizing ironic :P mishel

Posted 16 Years Ago


8 of 9 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 7, 2008

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Gillzy
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