Thrilling Killer

Contest: Describe a story in just 10 words.

She was thrilled in the bedroom, killed in the kitchen.

Reviews

[Gary H]

You are so right, just who can you trust? This will amuse you. I used to be a chef.

She was thrilled in the kitchen, killed in the bedroom..............thats my alternate version!

So pleased you have a top story. Well done!!!!!

Hope you win the contest.

[Cursorblock]

Very nice piece. I love all the possibilities - its kind of like radio before tv. You fill in the blanks for yourself instead of being spoonfed everything. Nice.

[Angie- Reading As Fast ..]

Wow,Gillian! I hope it won. It's fantastic... very powerful.

[Fantasyfairy]

Such a lot said in so few a wrods, but it adds so much thought, so many f=different scerios, and so many questions, could be a beginning of a story that would hook people in from this one sentence. XX

[Kimberley]

I like it because it's short!!! I am basic , i do not like reading essays. I am really glad you are highlighting how dangerous kitchens are.

[Chantal-lise Mirman]

with the candlestick, by Professor Plum... LOL

or, what happens when the Kissing Bandit has to escalate his modus operandi to be satisfied...
LOL, LOL

I could go on, but you've written an outline that could be developed SO many ways . Everyone that comes to this is instantly engaged and goes their merry way fleshing out their own details. Good job!

[Tonya (the Night Writer..]

thank you for posting this. I read gary's work and suspected this was the original, but wasn't sure! Very good ten word story, perhaps you can't trust anyone! : )

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

This is great.. alot said in 10 words!

Chloe
xoxo

[Silvia - Scribo, Ergo S..]

Answer: No, you cant! (oh, well maybe you can, but ony THE ONE! ...LOL)

Love it! Both witty and dark!

[Up To Beat Boi]

What!!!!
She was killed shocker!!!!

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

very tentalizing ironic :P mishel