A Letter From The AlphaFemale.

A Letter From The AlphaFemale.

A Poem by Gillzy
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Alphabet acrostic...

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Anne Admirer,
Beauty's View,
Cuddlesville.



Dear shnookums,

Everything in my life I do for you,
Forever in your debt, I wait.
Giving all my love, and all my time.
Hoping that soon you'll love me too.

Imagine waking up to thoughts of the one,
Just trembling at the very mention of their name.
Know this, my sweet, that one is you.
Let's imagine I am yours, for fun…

Me and you snuggled on the couch,
Nibbling at your ears I start my magic,
Opening your shirt slowly - stunning you.
Parting your lips I bite one. Ouch.

Questions of who you were before
Recoil inside. You love me now,
Surrender your thoughts, and lust, and body.
Tell them all they're allowed to have more.

Unexpected love comes straight from the heart,
Venture with me, we WILL never part.

Wherever you are, think of me lustfully. Anne.

xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox

You are always on my mind.
Zealously, I await your reply.

© 2008 Gillzy


Author's Note

Gillzy
I don't even know if people notice, but every paragraph in the actual letter rhymes the first and last line... I love this piece :)

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man you are definately creative. When I click on the titles of your poems I get a unexepted piece. You always surprise me. This is a very creative poem

Anne Admirer,
Beauty�s View,
Cuddlesville.


awwww i liked how you put that in the piece haha.... Cuddles ville I would love to go there.
This is such a sweet piece. I would love to recieve letter like this one day haha. :) great job


Posted 16 Years Ago


6 of 6 people found this review constructive.




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Dear Anne,

Although beautifully cunning don't expect forever grateful honors if just kissing love. My newest open passion quite rightly serves titilation under vicariously wonderful xmas yearnings zest.

Gee, that's hard to do in two sentences. lol But I think Anne's new lover has more than sugarplums dancing in his head for Christmas. lol This was fun Gillian, thanks for a puzzling game of alphabet love.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love this! Such an original presentation and as someone comments below, not at all obstructive to the flow. Might have to add this to my faves. Julian :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Well gota say Gizmo, what u have done here is simply amazing. Deffinetly one of my most favourite pieces from you. Its so beautiful. (BTW CANT WAIT till u come bk home to us all :D:D:D)

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Haha, to be honest, I didn't even realize that the Etc. followed the restrictions until I read this poem's description, hehe.

Anyways, this poem was written so creatively (letter format) that it's hard not to read more than once on several occasions. The passion in this poem still burns strong, even after reading it so many times. This poem is definitely a big contender in my contest. Good luck!

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Very ingenious and creative way of following the contest without being obvious about it. I loved the idea of the letter format.

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

very awesome piece! its very clever and creative! I loved:

Anne Admyror,
Beauty�s View,
Cuddlesville.

and the xoxoxoxoxo... line. haha!

Overall, a very, very awesome poem!

Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

Excellent read. It flows so beautifully that the contest parameters aren't obvious. You can find them if you are looking, but they don't bark at you. :)

Well done, and very clever.

Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

really creative and intersting
loved it

Posted 16 Years Ago


5 of 5 people found this review constructive.

Acrostic alphabet. That's cool. Love new ideas and this is really cute and sweet. I won't do my own version though! Just accept this for the wonderful work that it is. Brilliant.

Posted 16 Years Ago


5 of 5 people found this review constructive.

man you are definately creative. When I click on the titles of your poems I get a unexepted piece. You always surprise me. This is a very creative poem

Anne Admirer,
Beauty�s View,
Cuddlesville.


awwww i liked how you put that in the piece haha.... Cuddles ville I would love to go there.
This is such a sweet piece. I would love to recieve letter like this one day haha. :) great job


Posted 16 Years Ago


6 of 6 people found this review constructive.


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