What Have You Done?

what have you done to me? 
a haze of betrayal as feelings writhe. 
once we enjoyed innocence, 
Hand in hand and innocent, 
but your love died. 
a painful pool of blood 
tears follow night, follow bitterness, 
love bled dry. 
in a torrent of tears, 
I see you.

Reviews

[InsanityWriter]

Excellent imagery and powerful words. "Hand in hand and innocent." My favorite line. (: Again, wonderful job. Keep writing!