Thoughts

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a day ago
Thoughts

Where did the time go?
The time moves so slow,
As I sit here and wait.
The love never replaced,
The light shines upon your face,
Your lips soft and sweet,

All I can ask myself is what's wrong with me?

Maybe if I would've done different you would be here still,
I should've loved you more,
Do you feel the sense of regret when you think of me?

I still love you,

The memories kill me!

The way we kissed,
The way we danced on the rain glittered street under the moon light,
The way we smile at each other for no reason

I miss you
I love you

Reviews

[conversations with her ..]

I really enjoyed this poem, and I’m looking forward to reading more of your pieces. I'm kind of new on here and it would be an honor if you can review my 4 new recent poems. (The world is ours, Nostalgia, Paradise, and You)

Thank you and Keep up the Good work!

[Namyh]

Glo - When we finish crying that it's over, we can find some peace that it luckily happened and that it happened to you when it rarely happened to many others. Thoughts to still drive you nuts after time. Enjoyed. Namyh

[Chris]

Dealing with "after" is a world all its own. There is a taste of real to this - the mixed tense of was and nows.