i love candy so what?

i really love candies, sweet and tangy ummmmm... my fav

i love candy so what?

Don’t you when you were little?

I like hippity hopp !! all the time,

Don't you when you were little?

I like smiling all the time,

Don’t you when you were little?

I like watching birds trees and stars,

Don’t you when you were little?

I love the way I love everything of the world,

Don’t you when you were little?

 

I know you like it!

Then why you grow so big?

When you were little?

 

I know the answer!

I know why you grow so big?

When you were so little?

 

Who will like me?

Who will love us?

Who will take care of mine?

If you don't grow so bigger!

 

 

Reviews

[The dark story]

it is truly a cute yet an awesome poem. i like the theme and the way you have penned it. growing up seems never like a fun if we have to give up such things. they all make us frolicsome. yet we have to...and you have given that answer in your last stanza.
i really enjoyed reading it. thanks for sharing.

[Annie S]

i agree to this ^ .. who wouldn't love candy the way you (harshita ) your stanza is well structured.

[The dark story]

Uepp but there are few who doesn't. Like my.freind…that sounds weird to me though

[Annie S]

Everyone has different taste an i respect that :)

[The dark story]

True ofcourse:) and onme should do that.

[The dark story]

*and one*…typo there.

[Sherlock]

hahaha really good idea and poem !!! enjoyed reading it !!

[Laminators Dubai]

thanks! neha.