Jagger!

nonsense...as usual...

I'm not princess nor a movie star,
I'm not a fairy with a fairy power,
there's only thirty minutes in my hour,
only count till seventeen, still don't hit the beat!

I'm original, like every rainbow,
my always crazy, like lightning bolt,
I'm not a moon, but sure I worth one.
I'm a Gemini, sure you had a clue.

I can taste the colors, looking at the pain,
due to my insanity, I feel that the Sun shine rain,
can't spell that silly song,
did heard it somewhere,
I dance without the music,

You always took my seat!

If save have wave, then let’s just die like a brave
showing my moves, I'm in the party with dead
they are way more lively than those who sleep on the bed.
At least I can breathe between them, don't just love me coz I have heat!

 

Reviews

[Inda]

An energetic write! Love it!

[Laminators Dubai]

THANK YOU INDA!! HAPPY NEW YEAR!!

[Latifa]

I can taste the colors, looking at the pain,
I like this line alot and all the rest of the poem

[Laminators Dubai]

THANK YOU LATIFA!! :)

[Penny]

Very very nyc. Truly describes you, and the best part is I can relate to it greatly. Keep it up.

[Laminators Dubai]

thanks penny and HAPPY NEW YEAR!! :)

[Penny]

Ur welcum & same to you darling. Hope this brings mote happiness to your life

[Baby Ricochet]

There's only thirty minutes in my hour. Great line glitch. Keep up the good work.

[Laminators Dubai]

thanks BR and HAPPY NEW YEAR!! :)

[Sami Khalil]

"I can taste the colours, looking at the pain,
due to my insanity, I feel that the Sun shine rain,"

Amazing lines...:).......

[Laminators Dubai]

taste the colors, looking at the pain and sun shine rain...this is why i made that writing. thanks sami and HAPPY NEW YEAR!! :)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. You are welcome...:)...............

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well here's to being and accepting who you are.Yours is the most important opinion.Well written:)

[Laminators Dubai]

THANK YOU VIDYA!!!
HAPPY NEW YEAR!!

[Vidya Bacchus]

YOU ARE WELCOME GLITCH!!!!!
AND HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU TOO !!!.All the best my friend have a great one :)

[ron]

This is a cute poem glitch.

[Laminators Dubai]

cute?
thanks anyway! ^^

[ron]

It is cute, and it shows us who you are. I really do like this one glitch.

[Laminators Dubai]

ok...I believe.....I guess.......

[Sami Khalil]

"I'm original, like every rainbow,
my always crazy, like lightening bolt,
I'm not a moon, but sure I worth one.
I'm a gemini, sure you had a clue. "

Glad to know all these self confessions about you...I like this write alot...:)

[Laminators Dubai]

ok....so if you are so interested then take that!
I can fly!
just kiddingXD
thanks sami!ii!

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha. Metaphorically speaking yes or in a plane...lol
You are welcome...:)