realized

I just did it.
Did it again, after a long time.
I just rammed an antique blade in my ankle,
when it touched the bone I realized...

they were right!

I'm dead.

Reviews

[Latifa]

it has witty twice into it nice

[Laminators Dubai]

THANKS LATIFA!! HAPPY NEW YEAR!!

[Saddam]

very little poetry but very big fact..like....dekhan mein chhota lage par ghao kare gambhir.
I really attached with this...

[Laminators Dubai]

...LITTLE AND BIG, somebody come and move it!...haha......thank you!! ;)

[N!LoC]

what the hell lol!!!!! is this fact or fiction?? lol

[Laminators Dubai]

there's only one hell lol !!!! its a fact. rest of the play, in hospital.

[deadlife]

A deadly realization, quite literally. :)

[Laminators Dubai]

im thinking that what could be deadly for dead... i guess its life.
quite literally :)

[deadlife]

Indeed. Life is, in fact, the reason for all deaths, be it a living person or a dead one.

[Laminators Dubai]

well said. we live till death. death does worth dying.

[deadlife]

Indeed, death does worth dying. But it doesn't worth ending life any sooner than it should be. Suicides are NOT recommended. :D

[Laminators Dubai]

suicide is for cowards, you can die a little each day until death comes to you. life is uncertain and so do death.

[deadlife]

Yup, you said it.

[Laminators Dubai]

well you did helped me figure this out. thanks :)

[deadlife]

Most welcome.

[NeiL ArandA]

Ok make sure you DPT is current . They ten years valid . Ops wait who needs aTetanus shot when your dead . lol

[Laminators Dubai]

well, my doc take care of that. they still think that im alive....lol XDXDXD

[dw817]

⊰ℛℛ⊱
Umm ... ?? Let's hope you're alive long enough to enjoy a fresh cold cup of Holiday Eggnog ? :)

[Laminators Dubai]

Haha....yes! lets hope!! my least favourite game!! XDXDXD

[dw817]

Ah so you were playing an X-Box or WII game then ?

[Laminators Dubai]

no. not really playing. just expressing.

[PoetryPenPal]

WOW!!! That was lovely. I loved the surprise ending!

[Laminators Dubai]

well i wasn't surprised by ended...i expected.
thank you pal :)

[PoetryPenPal]

Your welcome:-)

[Penny]

I didn't actually get the meaning but i think it meant, you lived, i.e, biologically but emotionally u were dead. & if i'm ri8 it is fabulous.

[Laminators Dubai]

it is actually emotionally done writing. its about feeling something or nothing. i couldn't feel anything and so im dead as said. thank you friend :)

[Penny]

Ur welcum & 1ce again well done.

[Laminators Dubai]

....................... :)

[FlatLineBeauty]

A shocking realization. xo Winter

[Laminators Dubai]

shocking....well you can say that winter :)
glitch

[Sami Khalil]

A powerful realization and dripping ink...Bravo...........

[Laminators Dubai]

yes. it does dripped.
dripped warm, in this cold world.

thanks again :)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. You are welcome...:)................