My Heartfelt Ghost

"To my love who is gone but not"

There is space between us
where I can't see but I can touch
it's so deep... the feeling
I can feel you so much.

I reach but you're not there
my hand falls, eyes water
a deep breath... I manage
my thoughts, they ponder.

This place where you are
over the moon, through the stars
into a darkness, a void
there is no matter, only heart.

My head bows into my hands
I still feel you, I sense you now
mysteriously hidden... you seem to be
not in front... behind somehow.

I sit alone in a dim lit room
again I can feel you so close
again I reach to touch your skin
again I can't... my heartfelt ghost.



 

Reviews

[Kittenincake]

This portrays the loss of someone perfectly. It leads me to believe it was a recent loss - the feeling of being with someone and not being able to comprehend they are gone in the same day. Moving and compelling, thank you.

[Gypsy Dreamer]

Yes it was recent at the time. I'm sorry I'm just posting, I get on every now and then. Thank you for a nice review.

[Poeticme]

Very nice write, enjoyed the depth of the imagery. Thanks for sharing

Poeticme

[Gypsy Dreamer]

Thank you Poeticme.