Worst Sunday Yet

Worst Sunday Yet

A Poem by Yina
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This is somewhat of a sequel to 'The Most Amazing Moment'

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You know it's your worst Sunday yet

When you lose your very bestest friend

and the guy you're head over heels for

breaks your heart

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

That describes yesterday

© 2011 Yina


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A pianfull slap in the face to read. Heartbreak that is so deep. You can and will recover from this I know it to be true, for I have felt this as well and I since that you are stong and can become stronger form this! Wonderfully stated!

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Two punches to the heart at the same time, that's a real nightmare. How does one pick them self up off the floor after that but you can. It takes time to heal from something so awful but it can be done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ah I am so sorry.
Airing it out does help at times.
Once again I am so sorry.

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sorry heartbreaker, looks like youv'e been heartbroken.
I think you can be stronger for this. I mean, this will make you
stronger. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm sorry, I hope things get better for you, but I do like the red.

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked the red! Damn doesn't look like you had a good day, hopefully things get better!

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short and to the point, but a good write


Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You're right, red is better thanks:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Okay, darling. Shoulda painted it red. I want to you head right over to your messeges runnning now and explain it to me quickly. Because I care, and this just didn't feel very happy. Nice one, anyway.

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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