M.E.X.I.C.O.

M.E.X.I.C.O.

A Poem by Yina
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:)

"

Muncho mexicanos

Excessive eagerness from the guys

X-tra dust blowing everywhere

Ignorant teenagers

Cows going here an there

Or just loads of fun!!

© 2011 Yina


Author's Note

Yina
Just something I wrote for fun:)

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It reads funny and has perfect images of Mexico! Very Good write

Posted 12 Years Ago


LOL. . funny. I loved it!! Great job ;)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Haha, I love this! It's so creative and unique. Some of the poems that are written for fun end up in books and magazines. :) Good write!

~Lizzard~

Posted 12 Years Ago


go MEXICO!!!! :) (mexican hehe) -athena


Posted 12 Years Ago


nice
i loved that!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 5 people found this review constructive.

hmm we should probably take this with a grain of salt. that would be "mucho" btw and "and"... "Excessive eagerness from the guys"? What do you mean by that... and "Ignorant teenagers"? What's with that? "X-tra dust blowing everywhere"- are you criticizing Mexico? And do you have anything against cows too? O_o

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 8 people found this review constructive.

Love it! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 4 people found this review constructive.

Wow this was randome, but i liked it nyway! great write! ^^

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 5 people found this review constructive.

Every letter speaks true. Well... kinda dissagreeing with 'O' but hey! To each his own.. Nice one

Posted 12 Years Ago


cute piece! :))

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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Yina
Yina

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