Sometimes

Sometimes

A Poem by HakiSac

Sometimes i am the source of all that is right.
Sometimes my anger can turn day into night.
Sometimes i see through the veil of deceit.
Sometimes i can rise above the beliefs you think are concrete.

If sometimes was enough to shape behavior.
My kids would know me only as their savior.
But sometimes is a problem for creatures of habit.
I cannot be understood by this world, so you can have it.

© 2017 HakiSac


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I decided to also check out your writing, and I must say, it really is similar to mine in it's darkness, beautiful stuff.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

HakiSac

6 Years Ago

agreed, i like to find similar style writers. Thank you for your review.

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