Cold Heart

Cold Heart

A Poem by Hannah
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Under the shade of the tree,
my heart beats ever faster.
Your gaze never turns away.
Love in every word you say.

Why can't you remember the times like those?
I'm left with your scent on my clothes.
All my dreams put to death.
My heart aches with each breath.

You said you would never leave.
Now I'm alone on Christmas Eve.
I lay awake, staring at the stars
while my heart sits behind bars.

© 2017 Hannah



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Hannah
*reuploaded from my old account: http://www.writerscafe.org/HannahTaylor

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Quietly emotional write, Hannah.

The feelings portrayed in this poem are infinitely relatable; a love that was so full of promise having now been reduced to only memory, yet the heart within still remains imprisoned to the affections of the departed lover.

Simple in its eloquence and with nothing more to say...

A finely poignant poem. Nicely written.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hannah

2 Months Ago

Thank you very much, Doodley! You got the meaning of the poem just right. Your review is pretty eloq.. read more



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not just this poem but, Your every poem is filled with amazing vocabulary and breathtaking emotions!!!!
NICEEEEEEE

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hannah

4 Days Ago

Thank you very much for all your support.
catchy title. love lost imprisons us. matters of the heart are always difficult as captured in your words. well written and effective in expressing the longing and sadness.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hannah

1 Month Ago

Thank you for your review, Pete.
The title is very fitting, and the point is well expressed. Lying away, with nothing to do but think of that person. Very poignant.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hannah

2 Months Ago

Thanks, Clifford.
Quietly emotional write, Hannah.

The feelings portrayed in this poem are infinitely relatable; a love that was so full of promise having now been reduced to only memory, yet the heart within still remains imprisoned to the affections of the departed lover.

Simple in its eloquence and with nothing more to say...

A finely poignant poem. Nicely written.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hannah

2 Months Ago

Thank you very much, Doodley! You got the meaning of the poem just right. Your review is pretty eloq.. read more
this for me was a deep read. beautiful read and love the choice of words used

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hannah

3 Months Ago

Thank you very much, Jackie. I'm glad you enjoyed reading.
Jackie

3 Months Ago

of course. np. maybe swing by check out some my work. and i will check out more yours as well... tha.. read more

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