You Deserve the World

A candle flickers softly in the dark
casting eerie black shadows to leave their mark.

The candle illuminates the room
eliminating all despair and gloom.

The flames dance gracefully and bright
as they desperately impel the room to ignite.

You are the candle and the room is my mind,
you are my life and without you I'm blind.

You are the most beautiful and greatest friend,
you were always there  to help my heart mend.

You  deserve everything I wish I could give it to you.
You deserve a amazing life do you realize this is true?

You deserve a guy to love you forever.
You deserve a guy that will never say never.

You deserve a guy to tightly hold your hand.
You deserve a guy to that will always understand.

You deserve a guy to softly kiss your head
as he gently lays your drunken body in bed.

You deserve a guy to trap you in a web of love and to be tightly twirled.
No you deserve more than all that you deserve the world.

Reviews

[Short.Nerd]

So sweet! Amazing job:)

[Fontane Wong]

That was so sweet and adorable! It's really beautiful and romantic. I'm sure you truly love this person, they must deserve the world. Also, I love the last line of your poem, it's really great. It's a really excellent piece from your writing. A extremely outstanding poem. Nice job!!!!!!

[Adam :P]

aw sweet

[Katub]

This is really sweet, they must deserve the world.

[trainwreck]

This was adorable. Good job. I love the last line.

[Julie Beth]

aw this is so sweet i loved this one great job :)

[Libby]

Aw, this is really beautiful and sweet. c:

[lackluster]

I must say... Based off your words I figured to be in your twenties. haha In other words.. I am very impressed.
This is my favorite part.
"The candle illuminates the room
eliminating all despair and gloom."

[Midday_Mystery]

This poem is a great poem, errie , romantic, and over all sweet. A truly remarkable write

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and positive poem. I like the emotion of hope and care in your words. The poem flowed with good movement and a excellent ending. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote