Slaying the Dreamer (First Chapter: Steels)

The first chapter

I was looking at this reddish moon

Thinking of my foolishness...

What an erratic man am i?

This romantic moon reminds me of something i forgot a week ago.

I am now a drop out student and no one knows it, even my parents.

I remember it a week ago, when I and my friends playing sword fight using  steel bars until one of us hits the window of the classroom. The flashing of moments are damn fast. My friends start running while my feet seemed to be stuck on that event. The guards came rushing and carry me to the principal's office.

The principal looks like an old hag which looks like going to breath a flame... She looks like an dragon... *Scary*. I thought she will drew a knife but i seen her hand holding a paper. She smiled and told me that.

Principal: You Win!

huh? I tried to ask 'what' and then she told me that

Principal: You win! you win an exclusive dropping certificate! plus 1 year Suspension and chance to meet the school founder and the whole staff!

huh? what the damn she said? The cycle of life continues to roll... Life must go on.

I was framed up... what an unfair life...

Author's Note

Please point out my wrong so i can make it right, thank you

Reviews

[leah<3]

a few grammar problems but I enjoyed reading this :D keep it up!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

THIS WOULD MAKE A GREAT NOVEL OR LONGER STORY! GREAT PLOT!

[Misled Legend]

Meh... This is interesting I guess but I want to tell you that if you want to make a book or longer story then put it in the book section and just add chapters as it goes along. You probably already knew that though xD. Also it was kind of hard to read since everything was pretty much in one paragraph. Why not try this:

Post descriptive sentence(s) here.

What they/you said

Rinse and repeat. You have some grammar problems as well. If you ever need help just send me a message!