Time on the Clock

Random poem I wrote for school.

Tick tock.

On the clock.

Before time runs out

for this little sprout.

In the sprout, Cinderella dies

in pit of lies.

Snow White

gets in a fight.

Where Aladdin

isn't a ruffian.

It dies, the sprout,

when time runs out.

Reviews

[Stan Lee]

Cool random poem! :) Perhaps to keep the flow you could change the fifth line to "Where Cinderella dies" and then "in a pit of lies." just a suggestion :) thanks for sharing!