Paper fish

Paper fish

A Poem by Relic
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A variation on another poem I wrote.

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Paper Fish


Raccoon colored clouds, 
darkness gathers.
A tumbling sky, 
shoulders splatter.

Street puddles boil and gutters clatter.
Bullfrogs assert: 
what does it matter?

Neon light tassels lay lucent streaks
on Manhattan sidewalks 
and mirrored streets.

The rain from its cage has been released.
Had thunder been a steak
Could I serve a feast?

But today, I've become a sidewalk fish
whose shoes go squeak and squeal and swish,
near buildings that sit like sunken ships.

So I mop up memories
and swim away
from a chlorinated sidewalk this wet Tuesday.

But I feel, yes, I feel
that come what may,
I'm a paper fish
In this city today.




© 2017 Relic



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nice stanzas in till 'matter' and 'scatter' nice one thing i want to tell you can make it a song in my next film if you agree

Posted 10 Months Ago


Relic

10 Months Ago

No thanks.
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Gee
Images conjured are vivid, really well written , tripped of the tongue from first word to last letter.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Relic

10 Months Ago

Thank you. tripped of the tongue?
Gee

10 Months Ago

Flowed beautifully...
Relic

10 Months Ago

:) Thanks.
You really threw up some amazing images with your words here Relic, like a kaleidoscope, ever changing from one scene to the next, flashing images of the insanity that surrounds us but we rarely question. The last line really lingers, leaving me with the thought of wondering if a paper fish would be happier or sadder out of water.
I think I'll need to start calling such days paper fish days, when we see but can't quite believe what we are seeing around us, and the confusion that others see it too, but act like it is normal. Personally, I think we are all paper fish, pretending we are something more important.
Superb piece of writing. Very thought provoking.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Relic

10 Months Ago

Good review, thanks so much. :)
What a charming read. It skips along throwing up some gorgeous little images in a a light rhyme sauce. I like the little fish. It seems a good way to be.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Relic

10 Months Ago

Thanks so much R J.
Oh - I like this - a great read down the page and smooth, so smooth. Funny you mention Bullforgs and I mention toads - must be the day for these amphibians.

You paint lovely pictures my fish friend, I do hope you find a drain to take you to a river or sumfin X

Posted 10 Months Ago


Relic

10 Months Ago

LOL, thank you KWP.
well my friend you painted some lovely images

Posted 10 Months Ago


Relic

10 Months Ago

Thank you, Wordman.
 wordman

10 Months Ago

my pleasure,loved the image as well

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