I See...

I don't see the forest for it's trees

I see a girl that runs in tears,

I see beauty that disappears,

I see a naked girl with eyes full of tears,

 I see a world full of hate,

Full of sadness,

Full of tears...

A world that knows nothing but greed

Not from our nature but from what we think is need...

I see the lust of war,

the deadly sins and much more,

I hear heavenly wrath saying "No more"...

The girl is bleeding and no one seems to care

the girl will always be looking beyond our fear

For her smile forgave those who left her to bleed

By the wounds we made on her tender heart of roses and leaves.  

behold the girl who's heart is kind but not weak,

behold the one who made it through the leak;

Leak of light.

Of what might, 

Hoping to see a brighter white in this world of pride.

I don't see the forest for it's trees

I see a girl who's tear wipes out fear,

I see hope all through the rain which becomes notes that are nice to hear, 

So sweet to the ear,

I see beauty that reappears...

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Wow this was deep and so meaningful.
This was very well thought out.
Such an emotional strong piece.
Really wise words for someone your age..
you have talent. I enjoyed reading this.
Keep writing :)

[HummingMaster]

Thanks, your review means a lot :) glad you liked it

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Your welcome :) im glad :)

[I Am Svetlana]

Wow...this is an incredibly powerful piece. Greed can drive people mad and make them into such careless beings. Sigh...just the imagery in this piece is astounding and left me speechless.

[HummingMaster]

Thank you very much :)

[Sami Khalil]

I don't see the forest for (from)it's trees

[Wall of Words]

That. Was. Beautiful. Possibly even more than beautiful. I actually whispered this aloud as I read it, and the bitter sweetness of the words is enchanting. Enchanting, I swear. Incredible job. :)
What inspired this poem?
Wall of Words

[HummingMaster]

Thanks for taking the time to read it much appreciated :D. There are a lot of things that inspired me to write it like my lovely cat which I adore so much, seeing our neighbours cutting down their trees and all the other stuff we do to nature like the amazon rainforest, killing animals...etc.

[Sami Khalil]

Very appealing and appreciative of beauty in all its aspects. Bravo....:)......

[HummingMaster]

Thanks much appreciated for taking some time to read it :)

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome. ...:)...........