JUST WRONG

JUST WRONG

A Story by Imorbid
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Nine months and still having cravings. I send my husband to the supermarket. He returns, missing an item. We fight, I snatch the receipt from his hand and read the items back.

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Nine months pregnant and still having cravings. I send my husband to the supermarket. He returns with the most important item missing. And we fight, I snatch the receipt from his hand and read the items back.

“Eggs, milk, cheese, ice cream…condoms?”

”Condoms!” Furious, I point to the door.

© 2017 Imorbid


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Imorbid
50 WORD FICTION

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Ha-ha! The poor guy--some kind of pressure must be pushing against his brain stem. But seriously... nine months along? He really should leave her be and take matters in hand.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love it, such humour! You are a gifted writer my friend

Posted 6 Years Ago


Imorbid

6 Years Ago

Thanks, mostly dark humor lol.
Well this 50 words fiction tells a lot......
Nice going imorbid

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 6, 2017
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Imorbid
Imorbid

Kearny , NJ



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