My Favorite Moments

My favorite time of day

Are the seconds when I wake

Before my eyes have opened

To see your gentle face

 

And I’m about to turn my head

Into your chest and share your breath

Right before I remember

That you had ever left

Reviews

[emipoemi]

What an endearing love poem. Short and sweet and full of wonder. Stanza 2 Line 3 has a bit of musicality issues, but other than that, this is a mystical gem. Well done!

[Inkh(e)art]

Thank you so much! I made a slight edit. Hopefully it's a bit more smooth now

[emipoemi]

indeed indeed indeed! :)