My Favorite Moments

My Favorite Moments

A Poem by Inkh(e)art

My favorite time of day

Are the seconds when I wake

Before my eyes have opened

To see your gentle face

 

And I’m about to turn my head

Into your chest and share your breath

Right before I remember

That you had ever left


© 2017 Inkh(e)art



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What an endearing love poem. Short and sweet and full of wonder. Stanza 2 Line 3 has a bit of musicality issues, but other than that, this is a mystical gem. Well done!

Posted 2 Months Ago


Inkh(e)art

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much! I made a slight edit. Hopefully it's a bit more smooth now
emipoemi

1 Month Ago

indeed indeed indeed! :)

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