ghost

ghost

A Poem by Alm

I watch her cry
into her sleep
washing clothes with
holes
in the creek
sweeping unused rooms 
unwalked floors
and waiting for
unopened doors


© 2013 Alm



Author's Note

Alm
I feel that there should be more to this poem.

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I'm just going to spend the rest of my night stalking all your work, since your style is just so unique and... raw. It's so powerful, I think I might just die of an overload of good poetry. You just know exactly what to say to get the message across.

The only thing you might think about changing is in the first line, "watched" to "watch." It might make the piece more alive. It's your poem, though, and if that's how you like it, that's how it should stay. I personally don't think there should be any more to it.

It just sends chills down my spine every time I re-read it! Nice work!

Seriously. I'm just going to go down the list and read every. single. piece.

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Alm
Alm

By the sea, in a land called Honah Lee



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Alm is short for Alyssa Marie. I'm sixteen now, I don't claim to write well. I'm sorry if I review bad. Sometimes I bake snickerdoodles, the smell of cinnamon and vanilla on my fingertips lingers... more..

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