Try

Try

A Poem by J'Eliot

Try

Here I go again,
throwing my life in the trash.
No trace of motivation,
or an ounce of determination.
An optimist at day,
and procrastinator by night.
Somebody show me guidance,
somebody show me light.
People call me a pessimist,
but i'm a realist at heart.
Im not so naive to think,
that life is a beautiful art.
It has so many twists and turns,
leaving marks and burns.
It's the heart that gets the lesson,
but the mind never learns.
At the end of the day,
It's just me, myself and I.
Nothing else I can really do,
nothing but just try.

Copyright © 2013 by J'Eliot

© 2013 J'Eliot



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Very nice. I liked the part, "People call me a pessimist, but i'm a realist at heart." I honestly laughed when I read that one! I liked this poem, it sounds like excuses people make when they don't want to turn something in in our science class. Very good writing!

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J'Eliot

3 Years Ago

Thank you for the appreciation :)



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I think there is great flow to this, especially the second half where it seems to pick up pace.


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J'Eliot

3 Years Ago

Thanks for the review :D
Very nice. I liked the part, "People call me a pessimist, but i'm a realist at heart." I honestly laughed when I read that one! I liked this poem, it sounds like excuses people make when they don't want to turn something in in our science class. Very good writing!

Posted 3 Years Ago


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J'Eliot

3 Years Ago

Thank you for the appreciation :)
lovely this one flows brilliantly i love poems about the human strife's and perils good write my friend

Posted 4 Years Ago


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J'Eliot

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much! Your comment means a lot :)
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ron
I think we have all felt that way from time to time...some more than other one could say. Very well written. I like it. Your an amazing writer. Keep up the good work.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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J'Eliot

3 Years Ago

Thank you for the appreciation :D
ron

3 Years Ago

You are most welcome :D
It's so easy for me to relate to this...it's tough to keep your chin up sometimes. Really nicely written.

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J'Eliot

3 Years Ago

Thank you. :D

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