Water Bead

Another nature poem.

 

Water Bead

Justin Guidroz

 

Little bead

crawling down the leaf

amplifying the veins

as you pass

back toward home

in your crystal stream.

Reviews

[Rya May]

I like it! Very nice colorful language!
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[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on the Winning Poem! Well Done!

[Wicahpi]

Short and very sweet.
I actually find this a very nice write.
Thank you for your entry!

[DanaRegen]

Sweet and simple, your poems send descriptive pictures through my mind. I truly can picture a leaf with water droplets and so on. Great job and thanks for sharing!
-Dana

[S-W-E-E-T-S]

beautiful. Short and sweet. I like it when a writer can encompass so much emotion in so few words. Great write.

I admire the fact that the poem is short, yet to the point. The use of the word "amplifying" really caught my attention, I must say. As strange as it seems, I doubt that I've ever seen a poem with that word in it before.
And I can't help but point out (damn my inner spell/grammar check!) that the line "as you past" should be "as you pass".