Heart Wrench

He's taken my heart and pulled at its strings

His love is like a telephone that constantly rings

It's not like I understand, It's not like it's easy. 

But nobody told me life would be breezy 

I don't know what I'm thinking, 

Have no clue where I'm going 

I have no indication, no way of knowing

if he cares

if he cared

what am I doing

where am I going

does he miss me

does he need me

am I broken?

drowning in my own tears

i love you

are they my words or his?

Is he pretending

is it my heart he will be mending?

or is it all a trap?

How can I get out?

How can I get out?

Reviews

[A. Amos]

what am I doing
where am I going
does he miss me
does he need me
am I broken?

From your heart on to page, you write very nice thanks for sharing

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

The pure and shocking truth within the text is in complete comparison to the light breezy flow of the wording, well done, good read.

[Zackery Alan Daley]

I believe everyone goes through this stage in life. It is sometimes frightening to experience life because it has been romanticized to the point where normal things are feared. Great piece.

[Sami Khalil]

I love the honesty and the questioning in this well written poem...Bravo............