Haiku 2

Haiku 2

A Poem by James McFadyen

Scattered is my mind

like deciduous trees

paper thin, waif-like. 

© 2015 James McFadyen


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I like it James as it provokes images of floating leaves and drifting thoughts but two questions:
I thought Haiku referred to seasons and line three seems one syllable short?

Posted 8 Years Ago

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 Added on November 26, 2015
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James McFadyen
James McFadyen

London, Middlesex, United Kingdom



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Graduate from the University of Exeter: BA HONS English Literature with Creative Writing (Study Abroad) Former English Language Teacher in Hanoi, Vietnam. more..

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