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Haiku 2

Haiku 2

A Poem by James McFadyen

Scattered is my mind

like deciduous trees

paper thin, waif-like. 


© 2015 James McFadyen



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I like it James as it provokes images of floating leaves and drifting thoughts but two questions:
I thought Haiku referred to seasons and line three seems one syllable short?

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Added on November 26, 2015
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James McFadyen
James McFadyen

London, Richmond upon Thames, United Kingdom



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Student by day, attemptee-author by night. Studying English and History BA/HONS at the University of Exeter. more..

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