Haiku 5

Haiku 5

A Poem by James McFadyen

Sentries of bluebells

cresting the mantle of snow

blemish skin so pure. 

© 2015 James McFadyen

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Son, I have to be honest with you for once... we tried to have you aborted. That is why you're so retarded and handicapped now... it was the failed abortion.

Every night your hooker dog of a mother and I cry over your survival. You actually owe us money for ruining a perfectly good abortion.

Posted 9 Months Ago

0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

James McFadyen

9 Months Ago

Oh Christ, It explains so much!
Thank you. Thank you. Nothing is more beautiful than honesty.. read more
Beautiful and very beautiful!

Posted 1 Year Ago

0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A way with the descriptive word formed into verse is indeed your forte. Another descriptive, crisp and colourful portrait.

Posted 2 Years Ago

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Added on November 26, 2015
Last Updated on November 26, 2015


James McFadyen
James McFadyen

London, Richmond upon Thames, United Kingdom

Student by day, attemptee-author by night. Studying English and History BA/HONS at the University of Exeter. more..


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