Cross Wind...

Wind walking in love...

Cross Wind...

With the cross wind, I want to grab you and jump in,
let's not pretend, I want to spend my life with you,
are you ready to begin,

Like the wind dancing with the clouds,
I want to dance my life with you forever,
without any doubts,

We can waltz through this life,
you and I as a team,
won't you please be my wife,

1 2 3, we will step over or around,
any trial or tribulation,
because together we can face any situation,

We have danced into each other's hearts,
and there isn't anything that can pull us apart,

The next step in this dance is completely up to you,
but I am certain, that I'm in love with you,
I just need to know what you would like to do,

If you love me as I love you, please take my hand
and accept this dance, I want nothing more than
to give our love a chance,

So with the cross wind are you willing to jump in,
and let our love dance begin,

Now I can't promise you where this wind will
take us, or where we will end up,
but we'll leave that in God's hands
and let the great I AM handle our plans...

Reviews

[Jen]

Brilliant! Beautiful, its how I feel about a man at the moment. Great flow in this piece of poetry. I hope whom ever your someone is...she jumps in with you!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Ana B.]

Beautiful sweet piece of romance, i love the love them here :) Wonderful poem my friend.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Frozen Eyes]

"Let the great "I AM" handle our plans"
I relate so much to that. Thank U for sharing :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks again for checking it out and b-blessed!

[nazia]

this is such an honest and amazing expression of love. especially liked the way you expressed all your desires and in the end said I won't promise anything and left everything in the hands of GOD

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
I always leave everything in God's hands,
I want his will to be done...

[nazia]

Yeah.. that is fairly evident in all your writings. and I guess that's also the right thing to do

[Jamestown]

Thanks again!

[Geca]

This is beautiful. Though it may not state specifics, it really exudes the aura of young love, the apex of innocence. I love how it projects pure and unadulterated faithfulness, commitment and the heady rush of emotion that just blanketed the persona as they give up their life to this person in the belief that they are not losing their sense of self, but become a part of something bigger and much more wonderful in turn. Beautiful imagery, I can practically see the vision of this dancing behind my eyelids on a spring day. Wonderful!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your unbelievable review, I give you most sophisticated
reviewer award! b-blessed!

[Riv]

I love this poem, it's romantic and very entertaining to read. The feelings that you put into this are just amazing, and it makes me feel the love that I feel for my girlfriend. Poems like this will always lift my spirit. Pen on.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[closed]

Very consummate

a definitive sonnet


-Dream

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Gee]

A poetry proposal.Go get her JT

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Gee]

You're welcome,you might find the poem I have just posted interesting JT as you will read it with completely different eyes through which written.Take care.

[MOON]

Love is the key, it can be pure as the driven snow so to speak, it can uplift and make us better people. Lovely.

[Jamestown]

I completely agree! Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[DIVYA]

A beautiful proposal from a man totally committed to a life with his beloved. This poem has everything a woman could possibly dream of in a retaionship and more. It was a wonderful read. Thank you for sharing Jamestown.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review! b-blessed:)

[DIVYA]

You are welcome Jamestown. :)