Cross Wind...

Wind walking in love...

Cross Wind...

With the cross wind, I want to grab you and jump in,
let's not pretend, I want to spend my life with you,
are you ready to begin,

Like the wind dancing with the clouds,
I want to dance my life with you forever,
without any doubts,

We can waltz through this life,
you and I as a team,
won't you please be my wife,

1 2 3, we will step over or around,
any trial or tribulation,
because together we can face any situation,

We have danced into each other's hearts,
and there isn't anything that can pull us apart,

The next step in this dance is completely up to you,
but I am certain, that I'm in love with you,
I just need to know what you would like to do,

If you love me as I love you, please take my hand
and accept this dance, I want nothing more than
to give our love a chance,

So with the cross wind are you willing to jump in,
and let our love dance begin,

Now I can't promise you where this wind will
take us, or where we will end up,
but we'll leave that in God's hands
and let the great I AM handle our plans...

Reviews

[Mai L Nissen]

I love the vulnerability in this poem, JT! Doing exactly, what is called for in 'Love's Flight'

Minor thing: "and expect this dance, I want nothing more than" did you mean 'except'?
And I did not quite understand this sentence: "and let the great I AM handle our plans..."

However, apart from that the read had a great flow! For me your imagery gave me a feeling of warmth, sincerity and willing vulnerability.
This description is a great example of this:
"We can waltz through this life,
you and I as a team, "

This is a beautiful description of what love can do, the light hearted yet deep felt intimacy:
"Like the wind dancing with the clouds,
I want to dance my life with you forever,
without any doubts,"

Well, I could go on... There are many descriptions I love in this poem. The gentle yet strong expressions of this poem, reminds me a bit about "All in Due Time..." (Also one of my favourites)

I really enjoyed reading this! Great work, JT. Thank you for sharing :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and I love the fact that you will help me with my f-ups,
that's what I call a good friend and excellent reviewer! I appreciate you and the great
I AM is referencing God, thanks again and b-blessed!

[Mai L Nissen]

Ah, okay... That makes sense :)
Well, you are more than welcome.

[Mai L Nissen]

- It wasn't an actual f-up! Just a typo :)

[lovergirl]

damn! how i loved this piece , you really touched me with this love words of yours , i'm sure your woman is so lucky to have , well expressed and nicely written ;) thanks for sharing

[Jamestown]

I am single and longing to express my love once again, all in due time God will
make it happen:) Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, I appreciate it, b-blessed!

[lovergirl]

sorry for that , wish you meet the right one and she surely gonna be so happy with you cause obviosly you have so much love to give ;)

[Jamestown]

Thanks and all in due time, you are very kind, I appreciate it:)