Space for Rent...

Space for Rent...

A Poem by Jamestown
"

Future plans...

"
Space for Rent...

As lady love has rented
a space in my mind,

I plan on taking up permanent
residency in her heart,

Which will lead us to break her
lease and move to the city
to purchase a home,

Home is where the
heart is...

© 2015 Jamestown



Author's Note

Jamestown
God is good!!!

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What a sweet poem. Really puts one in good spirits.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Home IS where the heart is...good poem! And yes...God is good!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
A very optimistic poem. Its good to read a poem where love triumphs for a change.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Isabel25

3 Years Ago

You too James .
home indeed James, a lovely write this such heartwarming words :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!
James! i see you've been so prolific lately. i really apologize that i couldn't read all of your read requests. you see, i've been busy with assignments from the university so i don't go online here often. and this piece...short and refreshing :) a lovely piece indeed. this small poetic talk should be contained somewhere safe, somewhere far from the modern cruelty.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

I totally understand, do what you have to do:)
Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
You really put a smile on my face with this one, JT.

Nice and simple; great flow, playful imagery, crisp presentation... Crafty indeed!

I love it :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed.
Ahh, that's good, especially the end...a perfect ending. As a cancerian, that thought has always been imprinted on my heart. I even had this quote written on one of my wall clocks!! Home is where you can be tucked in lovely, warm blankets of security, and love is the same, isn't it? Safety and security is what every heart craves.

According to me, a heart which is spacious and accommodating, is truly a blessed heart.
Amazing metaphor, but still that ending takes the cake...:)

--Naomi.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
Inspired metaphors.
Cleverly fashioned; lyrically expressed.
Here, Jamestown, you, most poetically, reaffirm truth!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!
very short and inspiring.... He lives in our homes

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

And hearts, PTL! Thanks again!
Oh, I love this!!
Yes, yes, home is where the heart is!! And God loves us in our home, wherever it is!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jamestown

3 Years Ago

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

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Denver, CO



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