A dance in the wind...

The rhythm of life...

Dancing in the wind...

As the wind blows my blood flows and my
mind goes into a place only God knows,

And yet again we talk as his breathe pierces
my heart with the his tongue and his eyes of fire
scorch me the sun,

Only he knows what message I am to
learn after my soul has been burnt,

It seems like it's always his turn!!!

Why wouldn't it be you see, he and he only
knows the real me,

I no doubt trust thee, but often I close my
eyes and choose not to see even when
he is trying to guide me,

It's so obvious what I need to do
always stay in tune with my God
but easier said then done,when this old
dog wants to run,

I will always dance in the wind he
provides me and always reside with thee
I just pray that he will understand when I
choose to hide from thee,

I venture but never far enough for him to give
up on me and I will never give up on him
cause one day I will I literally be dancing with thee
in utter glee completely free...

Author's Note

ALL GLORY AND PRAISE BE TO CHRIST JESUS!

Reviews

[alf]

Hi James. You have once again blown me away with your words!! I can so feel the passion, the belief, and the energy of this write. You have totally mastered that internal rhyme, making this such a great read!!! Just brilliant, alf

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[sakshi arora]

It is an awesome creation. Nicely penned

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Valentine]

With Jesus all things are possible. People just do not as for His will to be done in their lives, they are really asking for their own will to be done. Give it all to Him..Valentine

[Jamestown]

I agree completely!
Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[jeannemarie coulter]

fine penning of your belief...i like the image flow...thank you

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[SmittyJas]

Hiding from God You got no place to hide my friend he is ever knowing ever loving God of our universe. blessing to you brother James From brother James.

[Jamestown]

Yeah I know what you mean!
Thanks again and b-blessed!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Awesome write Sir.......
give in to the flow and lord will take care of the rest.............
i loved it!!!
:)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[ANTO]

One can actually see temptation displaying its wares here like those fake watch floggers with the long mac open - drawing imaginary ribbons over the goods - saying 'looky looky - lovely things for youuuu'

We are only human JT. Not superhuman.
take care.

Great confessional-style poetry here - preconfessional even.

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[nazia]

When the faith is strong you can easily sail across any storm. Well penned :)

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and b-blessed!

[Jamestown]

Thanks for checking it out and your kind review, b-blessed!

[marcus]

Wow, what a great poem, deeply introspective!, I really liked it!