Chocolate Bar

I am dying for candy right now.

Touch my lips again, Lover,
Bathe my tongue in your sweetness.
Oh, how I've longed for you.

I grasp you tight in my hot hands
And as we melt together,
I feel you soften under my fingers.

A rustle of paper,
A moan of pleasure,
I devour you.

Reviews

[John Fitzgerald]

shall we call you the queen of brevity? :) a very seductive poem; the melt together reference was particularly good :)

[Rahul]

I grasp you tight in my hot hands
And as we melt together...... lovely, nice, deep and so Romantic lines... hey, you can continue this poem, i'd love to read.. nice flow of work.
Beautiful words and well penned :) 100/100!

[Relic's Bare Trees]

Clever, I thought you were talking about pop tarts at first. haha