The love puzzle

The love puzzle

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Love is a strange thing

Full of passion and desire

Hope and memories

Contentment and peace

 

How wrong it can go

One minute there

The next taken away

As if it never existed

 

The memories, good and bad

Buzz around your head

Trying to find a way out

But they are trapped

 

Nowhere to put them

Except in your heart

Which is now breaking

You’re falling apart

 

Picking up the pieces

Making a puzzle of your life

Trying to place it in correctly

But as you well know, it won't fit

 

Are you ever going to heal?

Will you ever be the same?

Hang onto your memories

Await your next love puzzle.

 

Reviews

[Mauricio Montoya]

put my heart back together.
Nice work

[Ceil Lovegood]

Its good,very good i might add,there's something missing though,we need to be able to eat the words and feel their worth.The soul of it is there,just try and give it a inclined taste,make the words delicious.

[Katannaism]

Very beautifully written with a slew of very good metaphors. Love it indeed-The emotion projected is also very raw.

[Valentine]

Thankfull I am past this point in my life and am not looking for that perfect someone to fill the other half of me..I filled it..Kathie

[KAREN]

You hit love right on the head with this poem! Excellent write and read!!

[Linear]

No more puzzles for me, a heart shattered to many times can hardly be put back together again, unless of course your name happens to be Humpty Dumpty

So many of your readers will relate to this exquisite poem of yours, for we all face heartbreak dont we? :O}

[Helena]

"Love is a strange thing"......ain't that the truth? Your first line drew me headlong into this and I wondered what was going to come next. I wasn't disappointed.....a terrific write! Well done!

[Joshua Smit]

not much i can say bout this.. never been in love yet

[dylancjames]

Very poignant words, oh so true, how wrong it can go, there's nothing quite like a broken heart, wonderful poem, thank you.