Untitled (2005.07.01)

Untitled (2005.07.01)

A Poem by J.Sin
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An untitled poem from 2005 that I found amongst some old pages in notebooks.

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Rage is sentient

Alive

I can feel it inside me

Like an unborn child

Kicking and screaming

In liquid disaster

I want to rip myself open

Tear through the layers of flesh

And blood

Release the monster

Watch it destroy you

Devour your soul

Make you suffer and beg

I want to watch it tear off your face

Suck out your eyes

Smile as you stumble around blind

Pleading to the educated ignorant

To give you the ability

To cry

And as it finally tears your heart

From your unfeeling chest

I want to invite my child

To crawl back into my womb

Wrap itself around my guts

Burrow in the pit of my stomach

And fill me once again

With the love

Of hate.

© 2017 J.Sin


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This is diabolical!.....(in a good way, means the message got across with great strength and power). Your imagery is superb, and the musicality matches ever syllable. Well done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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J.Sin

6 Years Ago

Many thanks for reading... and for your praise. :)

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J.Sin
J.Sin

Banská Bystrica, Slovakia



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Canadian living and working in Slovakia. World traveller, musician, writer, and teacher. Former music/film reviewer for "Cassette Culture" online magazine. 5 self-published poetry/short story books in.. more..

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