Poet

Some may say they write too deep !
Some may say " It makes me sleep "
The poet knows everything !
every line, every word and every bit !

some may say "your poems are crazy "
makes no sense ! makes me lazy "
it ain't that the poet writes to bad !
the poet is crazy and the poems are mad

we all have a poet inside our mind
all we need to do is go and find!

A hero of life! king of words !
Their poems are senseless!
They are wondering birds

Reviews

[Manuel A Hurtado]

I find the general concept you grappled with very relate-able, and often true. However, I feel that you used the exclamation mark rather flagrantly, and just for the sake of professionalism (in the future, one writer to another), proper grammar and punctuation is a must (save only if in the interest of the poem/writing's intentionally artistic dignity).

[Jas_I_M]

Thank you Manuel for the review ! Learning and improving :)

[Matching Socks]

You summed it up very nicely my friend!
xx

[TheSweet]

The idea here is nice, shows your joy of poetry off, and that's awesome! I'd say you need to tighten up your presentation though. There is no need to put a space between the word and the punctuation, the form is very important, so it needs to be both correct, and exactly the way you intend it to sound. Both of those are core.

I would also suggest you review the ending stanza, as it feels like it lost it's flow, was quite jarring, though not sure why. Perhaps give it a look, but it's just what I felt. Thanks for sharing :)

[Gabby Nieves]

This made me smile, love the last three lines especially c: and also very true, anyone can be inspired by anything and poetry should have no limits.

[Sourav]

There's a poet inside everyone. Good one.

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I love this. You are right. We all have that living poetic life inside of us that some of us never knew about until we searched for it. The truth though that some are not gifted enough to interpret, combine words into meaningful stanzas, and understanding the writing world. There is more to writing than what some people seem to think there is. Writing is an escape from reality into the dreams painted in our minds. Only the talented ones, poets, can use those images and transform them into words that'll blow the audience away. I only noticed one error. "it ain't that the poet writes to(should be too) bad"
Also, I think that the random quotation marks distracted my focus just a tad bit. Otherwise, excellence.

[Jas_I_M]

Thank you so much ! Glad you reviewed it so beautifully

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

You are very welcome!