Missing You

Missing You

A Poem by revolution9

Imagine getting a letter from a friend that is far away... I got one from an airman stationed in Alaska and this is it made me feel.


The letter came today

Your letter came today

The one you sent because you are so far away


            You are so far away


The chills came today

The chills you used to give me came today


            The chills came with your letter


The wind came today

The wind came today it felt like your breathe


            It sounded like you breathing close to me


The bleeding came today

The bleeding came today as I opened your letter


            From opening your letter


Smiles and tears came today

As I read your words


            I miss you too


© 2008 revolution9

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Beautiful in its simplicity. Loved it! :)

Posted 2 Years Ago

This poem is wonderful. The feelings are beautifully brought out with every verse. I liked the way of repetition very much. Very impressive. Keep it up!

Posted 3 Years Ago

Aww made me cry.
I feel that way when I get a letter form my dad sometimes.
Great work!

Posted 8 Years Ago

Yeah sometimes getting a letter like that will make you feel that way...you did a wonderful job explaining your feelings.
Great Job :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Although it is repetitive, it clearly gave the meaning to me.

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm struggling. Can't say how sweet and pure.. the repetition gives the narrative a really innocent and honest tone. So honest. My stomach is filled with longin' an lovin' for reading this one. Very nice Madame Q.

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice. a little repetitive

Posted 10 Years Ago

0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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