"A Baby Coos"

a little comical piece written for a contest. i had no backup copy of the poem. :(

Reviews

[romantic comedy?]

I just read One Quick Decision. Is this the sequel?

[Leaps And Bounds]

I think it's funny.
I've have lots of siblings and nieces and nephews etc so this poem sort of reminds me of them.

Thank you for reviewing my poem and welcoming me.

[Ice QueenJen]

haha This was hilarious Jet!

[An Ordinary Woman]

lmao, so true. Reminds me how many diappiesI've changed over the years. Yikes, I'm sooo glad it isn't me anymore. lol Great writing!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

LoL.. i love this.. very comical and SO true.. a nice little ditty.. will read stories tomorrow , gotta go to bed.

Chloe
xoxo

[Spoken]

lol, reminds me of a rather unpleasant diaper change I had with my friends child. I've never seen so much poopy come out of such a small thing! Very cute. I'll join in the applause as well!

[James K. Blaylock]

This was really awesome. Congrats on the win!

[Yvonne Heidt]

*joining in the applause!" Excellent job and congratulations on winning the contest! Super-creative.

[PianoandPage]

*applause* wow. major props on this one. funny, flows, and reads like a snippy little poem. this has my vote!

[Rain]

LOL.I just watched my grand daughter being born a couple weeks ago. I need to print this out for my son and daughter-in-law. This was very clever. Rain..